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HE WANTS MY SOUL
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:13:32 AM in AEST
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Designed by: ~Linda's Signatures~
There's a voice in my head
that says, I'd be better off dead,
pick up a gun or knife
run away from life.
no one cares if you live or die,
I hear that voice cry.
You've been bad your life thru
there's nothing left
you know what to do.
Crying to God on my knees
he heard my desparate plea.
He said
That's only Satan seeking your soul
give it to me
I'll take full control.
God's voice of luv to me
now Satan has no choice but flea!
By
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-05-05 04:13:32]
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:42:09 AM AEST
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i really liked this one...
okay I knwo this is stupid but i think the poem's sorta cute...the end line like...
hehe...
i loved what a good job you made making it rhyme...
oh and the flow was magnificent by my eyes..
hehe it's so cuuute...
the idiot now 13yr old..
katie |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:26:48 AM AEST
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| thats beautiful and so so true... im glad you asked for God's help.... he doesnt steer you wrong... i mean really what would the world be today without your beautiful writes :) :) :) |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:43:51 AM AEST
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He can and will lead us through any dark time if we just let him. He never forgets or neglects us and loves us no matter what we do. This is so beautiful.
Rita |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:36:46 PM AEST
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Emy This Is So Beautiful And So Very True !!!!!
God Is Awesome !!!!!!!! Bless You Girl Friend..
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
******************************* |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:46:43 AM AEST
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| Hmmm i know those voices...a never ending battle....God smiles upon you sweet emy. |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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| Keep a strong mind and heart emy. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: HE WANTS MY SOUL
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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Thank you, I know you have yours in this.
But from time to time some one like me just needs some emotion to read like this.
Nicely done |
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