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piano
Contributed by
saha
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:47:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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At night again
I am sitting at the piano
Playingmy requiem
With whispering rain.
Under my fingers
Fingerboard wet from thear.
Copyright ©
saha
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2004-05-05 03:47:31]
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Re: piano
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:04:06 AM AEST
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With whispering rain under my fingers, now that's a keeper!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: piano
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by saha on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:18:00 AM AEST
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| "under my fingers fingerboard wet from tears" is next sentence. there was " . " |
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Re: piano
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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| Got a strong sense of loneilness from your poem, brought tears to me eyes- very excellent! |
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Re: piano
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:05:23 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful..
charlotte x_x_x |
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