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Alive
Contributed by
Soulrebel973
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:54:23 AM in AEST
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oops
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When Im with you I feel alive,
I feel alive like a summer time smile,
like everything will be fine as long as the world still spins beneath our feet,
like the last song was great,
but this next song, this next song is the truth,
like we could take it back to 40 days and 40 nights, and for a minute like this it'd be worth each and every drop,
like im a hop, skip, and a jump away from crossing the finish line and winning this rat race, better yet, I'm riding on the back of God's pegs just coasting into heaven's gate...
yet so alive.
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Re: Alive
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:04:50 AM AEST (User
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Very good write.
totally unique.
luv, huggs,
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