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Colors
Contributed by
superash16
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:19:58 PM in AEST
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everything's about color.
its how people perceive.
how you are, if you're good,
it's all about colors, you see.
my skin is white,
my hair is blue.
does that really
matter to you?
of course it does,
you're only human.
my clothes are black,
i might be insane but
if everyone looked alike,
everything wouldnt be the same
we wouldnt care about color
color wouldnt be the reason for maim.
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Re: Colors
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:49:29 PM AEST
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| O.k. I can see where you were going with this... could have been longer, but overall it gets a C+ |
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Re: Colors
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:29:14 PM AEST
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| ahh the world is filled with colors... and the interpretation is so variant... what a nicely done piece of art you wrote... with a good message :) :) :) |
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