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When Were Old
Contributed by
blondie_64865
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When we get old will we be
The same way that we use to seem
Will we walk hand in hand you next to me
While the smiles on our faces absolutely beam.
Will we rock in our chairs on the porch
Drinking ice tea while in the sun we scorch
Will we still be having sex along with the rest
Or just be really glad that we gave it our best
When were old who knows what the future will bring
Truth be told i'll always be proud to be yours and wear your ring
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2004-05-04 22:52:51]
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Re: When Were Old
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:10:38 PM AEST
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| how sweet. i liked it. good write |
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Re: When Were Old
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:36:34 PM AEST
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| That is so sweet for all ages, young, old and in between. Beautiful poem. Thank you. |
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Re: When Were Old
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by bernard on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:16:13 AM AEST
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You have the right idea that is about right your picture of old age, Thank you for a very pleasant read.
bernard. |
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