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Loosely Spoken Word
Contributed by
Alli
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He gives me the word without any reason
But swears it will outlast many a season
He looks at me expecting to hear it back
But I don't know how to fake an emotion I lack
And I can't help but wonder
As he looks down from above
Does he really know the meaning of the word that is love?
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Alli
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2004-05-04 22:27:44]
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Re: Loosely Spoken Word
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:31:48 PM AEST
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| very refreshing to read something about love, but not the superficial kind. good write. |
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Re: Loosely Spoken Word
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:23:49 PM AEST
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Have often asked that, do they really know. With some, yes we do.
Very beautiful poem.
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Re: Loosely Spoken Word
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:38:41 PM AEST
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The 'word' spoken in the heat of the moment- always a thing to dread!
Very well written, short and to the point. Well done!
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Re: Loosely Spoken Word
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:29:23 AM AEST
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I thought this was another good write. Short it may be but very well put together and I think conveys thoughts well! Yeah I liked IT.
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