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I Wish I Had A Neat Typewriter
Contributed by
tHE_pERFECT_wORLD
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:56:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I wish I could write poetry
oh how I do
I wish I could write poetry
Write poetry like you
I wish I could make my feelings would come
With paper and pen
I wish it was suave and good now and then
I wish I had the perfect words
so my poems compaired with the songs of birds
I wish they where good
Oh how I do
I hope one day I write poems like you.
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Re: I Wish I Had A Neat Typewriter
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:04:08 PM AEST
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I happen to like this one. It is great to write. I use my writing as a catharsis for inner feelings usually. I think this is pretty darn good. I give you ****.
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Re: I Wish I Had A Neat Typewriter
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:17:44 AM AEST
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that's really sweet,
Right up my street!
now that's bad poetry! yours was very good a nice little ditty.
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Re: I Wish I Had A Neat Typewriter
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:43:55 PM AEST
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Cool write. I like this one. And you can write.
:-)
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