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OoOo Little Blue Marble oOoO
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:38:28 PM in AEST
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She holds the world,
the fragile
little blue marble,
within her gentle hands.
The sands of time
change around her,
her heart is broken,
she cries tears of fear.
Fear for the
little blue marble,
that is held
within her grasp.
What is to become
of this
fragile world of ours?
She prays to
our Father in the Heaven's above,
to guide mankind
from evil and hatred.
She is an
Angel of love,
she prays for the
little blue marble,
that is held
within her loving hands.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.4/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-05-04 20:38:28]
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Re: OoOo Little Blue Marble oOoO
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by tHE_pERFECT_wORLD on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:46:19 PM AEST
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I love the childlike power in this, though that may have not been your inttention, still, I feel that, and it feels cool, I, at the mere age of 12 really love feeling that. The love expressed for someting can be as strong as anything though nothing to anyone else, good point in this poem too. . and the reseblince the marble must hold and whatnot, there are so many perspectives on this pom, another great thing. I love it! Well, keep writing, much...hope, still.
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Re: OoOo Little Blue Marble oOoO
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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Yes, we all need to step back and look at the precarious situation this world is in at the time. Death and destruction and the loss of many lives due to greed and evil powers. Hopefully peace will return soon and give her a chance to rest and regroup her strength.
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Re: OoOo Little Blue Marble oOoO
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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| Inspirational, I loved it. |
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Re: OoOo Little Blue Marble oOoO
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:49:48 AM AEST
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| beautifully touching..venkat |
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