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Promise Of A Raindrop
Contributed by
Angela
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:01:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish I could live where the rain never stops,
Where the sun doesn’t shine,
In the evening it would never get totally dark.
In the blink of an eye,
You could dim out the sun, and the rain would start.
I could pace down the street, no umbrella in hand,
You would pass by me each day,
And I would meet you again.
We would have long conversations,
At night in the dark,
About the grass, and the trees,
How life would always stay humid,
Alone, and decisive.
How I would never kiss, your slender pale lips,
We didn’t even want to imagine,
How either of us would feel if that happened.
Just when dawn is ready to break,
You would turn to me, smile, and say,
“I know you need to leave, but promise me,
That one of these days you’ll decide not to go.�
Meanwhile, we would be laughing,
Singing songs about people who were just like us.
We didn’t want to think that life was this tough.
So catch a raindrop in your hand,
And wish upon one thousand stars,
Tell me once more to swear I’ll come back to you,
And every night we will keep having meetings in the dark.
One of those wishes has to come true.
Tomorrow might not always come,
Forever might not stay this way,
If today ends it all,
There’s something you must know,
It’s that to fall in love with you,
Means the sun could eventually start to shine,
And it could stop raining all the time.
Copyright ©
Angela
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2004-05-04 20:01:59]
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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A bit sad but really written well.
sounds like u need to live in Tacoma Washinton USA. It rains there 9 months out of the year. Ya sure don't get much sun.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:25:45 PM AEST
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Good write, it means so much to read this, and i know how you feel... keep up the good work.. Much love
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by tHE_pERFECT_wORLD on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:41:42 PM AEST
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| Damn this was a good write, I hope to see more soon, Much . . hope, tHE_pERFECT_wORLD |
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by Pompous on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:30:00 AM AEST
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a great sweet, sad poem, I know how you feel...its actually happening to me right now...anywayz I love this poem
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:15:40 PM AEST
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This is a really meaningful poem.... I know how you feel..... good write
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Re: Promise Of A Raindrop
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by abie05 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:57:47 AM AEST
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| hmmmm I LOVE dis one can i keep it? ... haha =) i love rain ... ooops i mean i love da rain =D ... dis one really hit da spot for me ... gud one =) |
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