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I Unlove You Too
Contributed by
tHE_pERFECT_wORLD
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:53:11 PM in AEST
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The day our eyes met it was like the spark of a lifetime, proving my existance to myself, who ever thought a day would come when I would wish a death upon you? The days spent together where like heaven, kisses so soft and sweet, but the final touches, bitter and hard. Never had the wormth of a smile lighted my soul in such a way yours did. But smiles fade and become dark and cold. Never had I thought of someone for so long they where always with me, but Id miss you sitting there. Never could anything replace your arms rapped around me in the cold must, but now the cold must raps around me, your arms around yourself. Never had the sound of breath comforted me so as the way yours did, but now it feels like a flame to my heart, burning it, burning away everything Id ever known,or thought I knew; just like Im burning your house right now.
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Re: I Unlove You Too
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:59:28 PM AEST
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I hear every word.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Unlove You Too
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by Dragontear27 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:04:11 PM AEST
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| very good poem if you felt that way t=when you wrote this you do a very fien job of expressing yourself. Again nice write. |
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Re: I Unlove You Too
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:26:07 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem. I like this. I REALLY like the end. heh heh heh I like to think I could exact revenge on those who have wronged me, but I can't. I believe what goes around, comes around! I've seen it, I know it's true. Got distracted,sorry. :-) Good expression and emotion. Keep writing!
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