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Alone
Contributed by
IamChrisHuff
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:13:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm running fast but going nowhere
A putrid darkness grips my soul,
The walls around me are hard,
But unable to be felt.
I fear my master's left me.
Stranded in my darkness with naught
But a hope for my master's arms.
Right here, I want to cry forever.
No greater sadness ever I've felt.
Longing for my master's kindness,
I run, determined.
There is no end to this maze
Of darkness and despair.
I don't know where I'm going,
Or how I'm getting there.
"I give up, dear master!
Please take my soul and console me,
End this terrible pain, this burden!"
But there is no answer now.
Not yet.
"Master, I beg of you!
Allow return to your home...
I am hiding in the dark,
I don't like being alone!"
Behold! Salvation.
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:19:30 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
Ya know when I finally found a way to let go of my own troubles and being mindfull of others then God moved miraculaly!
It's really hard when there's only darkness but one we're humbled then we see a tiny light and before we know it he's done turned on the big lite.
It's a bit sad but then it shows great hope.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Alone
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by Randibee85 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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Wow, that's great!
Is "Master" symbolic of an emotional issue or is it an illusion to God?
Either way it's excellent! I bow to you! |
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