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Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just stop and think
Of who you are...
Of what is you...
And what you are
Of what you see
Of all your friends
And who is there
When classes end
Of who you like
And of who you love
And who you see
In the skies above
The way you stand
And the way you look
And even the way
You read a book
It's all YOUR life
Say what you may
Do what you like
And live it your way
But never let
Your life go by
And sit and think
Of how you'll say
goodbye
Copyright ©
lifefliesby
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2004-05-04 18:21:12]
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:37:01 PM AEST
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| A great life read worthy for anyone's eyes. It's good to see optimism in a write, as that doesn't seem to come too often. |
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by voiceinthewilderness on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:46:25 PM AEST
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I second theschroedmeister, optimism is great in poetry. Very well formed too.
Good job! |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:04:15 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. Life is too short to spend trying to find a way to die. There is so much beauty and love in this world, all you have to do is look to find it. Wish more people felt like you.
Rita |
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:08:45 PM AEST
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YAY! Way to be optimistic! I told you it was a better way to look at things! I'm so glad you've got a happy write.
Bravo and encore!
Love,
Chelsea |
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