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The Pretty Place has Been Found
Contributed by
jamsters
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:24:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Sitting here
as a normal person
The thing unknown to
everybody
including friends and family
is my love
My love for
the markers
the coke
the ice
the heroine
ect
All anger gets out
of my by makin me
high
The floor moving
underneith my feet
the blurring colors and swirls
surrounding me
Everythings so
peaceful
this is my paradise
that I cant and will never
excape
even though
I tryed
Everythings so pretty but I want
and I need to get away from it
This is the pretty place Im going to
where the flowers grow
I will be back
in an hour or so
I NEED OUT!!!
These blood shot eyes have seen
enough
and this swolen nose has snorted
enough!
Copyright ©
jamsters
... [
2004-05-04 16:24:18]
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Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:52:16 PM AEST
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| very interesting and honest write |
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Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:11:55 PM AEST
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man, so much i would say on this, but all i can say is that this is creative and good writing... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found
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by monkey on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:24:22 PM AEST
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| Please tell me the part about the ice, heroine, and coke are exaggerations too. Believe it or not...as perfect as my life may seem...its not. Sometimes I feel like running away, or commiting suicide (althought I never would because id miss you guys too much!!) Sometimes I just want to lock myself in my closet, cry, and hide from the world for days. Other days, I feel like I could kick anybodys @$$... You know what I mean... lol! Anyways, i'll ttyl luv ya 4eva ~ Monkey |
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