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Commited
Contributed by
cheech
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:38:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i will never take away my love for you
no more heart breaking,i'm sick of the
aching too,i know what you've been through
i hope this is fait,everything feels so great
i hope i'm not too late to catch the right
feelings,i hope i don't irritate you with this
drownding in happiness,cuz you've got me laughen up
a storm,choking from the moment where everything
feels like theres no one else here but you and me
i'll never have second thoughts,yes that means
i'm deeply commited,commited to love and cherish
you for the rest of my life,i'm deeply in love with
you,i'm more than commited,commited,commited
what wonderful thing did i ever do to deserve this
much love from whom is so special and importand
i'm sorry i don't understand,but i'm loven this,i can
stand holding eachothers hands,you're the best man
you're gonna make me the happiest person ever
i'm gonna make you the happiset person forever
i can see it now,things are all gonna be better
if i go i shall return with a greater love,a greater love
that will show you all the things that i'm feeling,you've
never made me mad or sad,the only thing that is bad is
when i have to leave,i'm almost in tears,in tears,in tears
i use to live with a heart ripped open and blood just
a pouren out,now i know what its all about,get up
and shout i love you,cuz its so true,we'll get through
i'll never have second thoughts,yes that means
i'm deeply commited,commited to love and cherish
you for the rest of my life,i'm deeply in love with
you,i'm more than commited,commited,commited
you'll never know until i show,must go with
the flow,i know which route to follow,i'm
not shallow,i love you more than these words
will show,please tell me that you love me too
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cheech
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2004-05-04 15:38:20]
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Re: Commited
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:43:29 PM AEST
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| This is a great wirte! Hope you get the anserw you are lookin for! |
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Re: Commited
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:10:28 PM AEST
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*smiles* this is sappy and lovely and oi... *sigh* ... pretty, i like it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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