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Days With Him
Contributed by
reilt
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:25:56 PM in AEST
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Days spent with him
Etched into my skin.
There are mountains yet for me to climb,
A steep incline
But I am inclined
To say I'll be fine
With him by my side
to lighten the load
And elevate my fading spirit.
When all the world lets me down,
Days with hiim
Will restore my faith.
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reilt
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2004-05-04 15:25:56]
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Re: Days With Him
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:41:32 PM AEST
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| This is great! Wonderful job! |
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Re: Days With Him
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:01:36 PM AEST
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Days spent with him
Etched into my skin.
Now there are two lines I could only dream of writing. Nice stuff.
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Re: Days With Him
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by arden on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:03:26 PM AEST
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so very sweet.
you wrote this so beautifully.
lovely write.
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Re: Days With Him
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:03:44 PM AEST
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nice to have people like that around you... this was nice, i love it! ;0)
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Re: Days With Him
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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A beautiful ode, charlie sounds like a lucky man.
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