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TIME
Contributed by
reilt
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:15:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Clock watching
Stares
Back and forth,
It's a watched pot boiling
Or somewhat similar.
Eyes keen to move
In tempo
In wait
In vain.
You have lost all concept of
And need not feel
The slow hands
Softly wipe the tears
From a face
That fears
The indefinite and infinite
Emptiness
Of time.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-05-04 15:15:08]
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Re: TIME
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by arden on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:29:25 PM AEST
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i really liked this.
very interesting. well written.
keep up the awesome work!
Arden |
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Re: TIME
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:55:28 PM AEST
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time lingering a bit too long on your table? seems as so, nice write. i like it. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: TIME
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:49:23 AM AEST
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| Well written...truly a sad piece. |
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