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Potissimum
Contributed by
Diatribe
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You should have seen it
Their eyes resembled cellophane
And for some it was rain
As we sat rowed
In front of ash and photographs
Could you have pictured this?
Names as tattoos last forever
On the backs of necks
Were you thinking of her?
All we own now
Train wrecked expressions
Sleep forever… potissimum
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Diatribe
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2004-05-04 14:25:58]
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Re: Potissimum
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:25:03 PM AEST
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oi, this burns a hole in my heart... beautiful piece...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Potissimum
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:44:15 PM AEST
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Well, this immediately punched a big hole in my heart. Such few words but great powerful emotion. Excellent work.
Rita |
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Re: Potissimum
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:47:03 AM AEST
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very touching.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Potissimum
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by boricuacd on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:24:53 PM AEST
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| i like this one. |
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