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Love Forsaken
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:58:16 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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This heart taken,
Love forsaken,
Why do you break it
And allow the love to escape
Into the night,
To fly away
On the wings
Of the black raven
Who for Poe quotes
"Nevermore"
Forever haunted by this....
Love forsaken.
Love forsaken,
Never spoken
To reveal its presence,
And now knowing my patience
Was cowardice,
Knowledge of my
Stupidity,
Proof that truly
Love is blind,
For if it weren't, I would see
All we'd end up with is nothing to see,
But love forsaken.
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-05-04 13:58:16]
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Re: Love Forsaken
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:11:24 PM AEST
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I like how this was done.
You made it feel very original.
Nice. Very nice. |
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Re: Love Forsaken
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by dAWn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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Very well written...
Can relate to this actually...
Yes a very good part with the Poe quote |
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Re: Love Forsaken
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:18:02 PM AEST
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dontcha just love being in love?!? egh, odd reading things like this - it seems to familiar even though you wrote it! but good, and original... i like it ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Love Forsaken
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:04:21 PM AEST
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don't worry she'll talk to u soon. with all the stuff that u have writen, i don't see how she would stay away to begin with.
as usual, i'm here to talk if u ever wanna.
~allyson~ |
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