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Feelings, A State of Being
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:50:03 PM in AEST
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Anxiety
Overwhelmes me
As I look and try to see
The reason behind
Your fickle state of mind,
I must be blind
To not see the reason
Behind this treason,
Why your love changes with every season.
I suffocate,
Overcome by your hate,
But wait,
You used to love me,
Please, baby,
Help me see,
What did I do?
Don't you still want me to love you,
Or are we really through?
I'm still in love,
My heart flies like a dove,
But I get shot down by your betrayal of love.
But I get up again,
Fly again,
You know I'll always love you, til the end.
Maybe, hopefully, one day you'll be
Able to look at me
And say again that you love me.
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-05-04 13:50:03]
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Re: Feelings, A State of Being
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:52:46 PM AEST
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Re: Feelings, A State of Being
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:08:09 PM AEST
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don't hold your breath... lol, good writing, that's what i like about it!! ;0)
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Re: Feelings, A State of Being
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:07:29 PM AEST
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i hope that she duz.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Feelings, A State of Being
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 06:05:55 AM AEST
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One of those situations we hope never to
find ourselves in, but more often than not,
we always do!
Nice write
Star x x x |
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