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Blood On Hands
Contributed by
Cursed_Witch
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Blood on hands, Knife in hand
I cry and shout
Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?
Thank u mom, Thank u dad,
Thank u for being here
For letting me get this far,
For being blind and not help
For neglecting me
For seing me as a burden
For telling me I'm a mistake
For making my life a living hell
I didnt want it to end it this way
With blood on my hands and a knife in hand
Blood of the man i just killed
Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?
Taking somebody elses life instead of mine
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Re: Blood On Hands
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by kailadragon on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:31:46 PM AEST
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| wow, good write. I can identify with some of the things you're feeling in here. excellent! |
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Re: Blood On Hands
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:05 PM AEST
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| good, but i didnt really understand why it was the parents fault lol, sorry me dumb, good though, thought provoking, i supose by me not knowing the reason it allows me to use my imagination :) |
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Re: Blood On Hands
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:59:59 PM AEST
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hum, i like that it's not a self-deprecating suicidal binge! interesting write, pointed questions - hopefully you find your answers. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Blood On Hands
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:45:53 PM AEST
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| Remarkable! Nice flow |
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Re: Blood On Hands
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by saphfyre on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:38:52 AM AEST
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lashing out... screaming..crying... its not in the poem, but its there
I hear you |
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