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I Mean To........
Contributed by
juliette
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I mean to put this anger down, and leap boundlessly
Into that part of you that protects me from my paltry past.
I mean to lay my pain at your feet, and walk away quietly
As somehow you always know what to do with wasted weight.
I mean to flee this sadness, and boldly bury myself
In the warmth and security of your eager embrace.
I mean to forgive my hollow heart, once and for all
For shutting down so completely and leading me forever astray.
I mean to open my soul, and allow you real access
To this place you have dwelled so secretly since I have known you.
I mean to do all this, and yet I stand here, fearfully
Staring off into the distance that separates our two lives
Knowing what could be will never be.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2004-05-04 12:31:32]
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Re: I Mean To........
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:34:51 PM AEST
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| very sad and vivid,,,,,, |
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Re: I Mean To........
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:17:57 PM AEST
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erg, sometimes i don't like pondering like this - much as it is needed. superb writing, quite peaceful and dreamy... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: I Mean To........
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:18:16 PM AEST
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| great poem...so heartfelt and so sad. wonderful write |
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Re: I Mean To........
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST
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| Heartfelt and the sadness radiated from the poem enveloped me. Good job. |
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