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Talking back to my head.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:42:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I’m smiling out to you now.
I’m gonna fight back,
YOU WON’T PULL ME DOWN!
I’m releasing hidden words,
From my structure of within.
I’ll make you break!
So you can’t crawl in my skin.
All this time,
You’ve lived in me.
Broken me.
Made me bleed.
Twisted my words, until I broke.
Well, now, I’m here.
This is no joke!
You can whisper to me.
But I won’t give in!
You bring me insanity.
Followed by sins.
Here I am.
And I’m going no where!
You can’t push me out.
So you’d better beware!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-05-04 11:42:49]
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Re: Talking back to my head.
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:36:37 PM AEST
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i like the strength of this... it's encouraging! good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Talking back to my head.
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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it has a chillingly sinister value behind it. good job.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Talking back to my head.
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:19:29 PM AEST
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| I know exactly what you mean. Good poem. |
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