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desire
Contributed by
broken-glass
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:09:13 AM in AEST
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Another blackout party
souless army
of whores and clowns
distorted frowns
liquid courage
cheating, yet winning.
We can enjoy ourselves another way
behind close doors
instead of in anothers eyes
if only they knew
if only they saw
They say to try
if you like it dry
right now is fly.
Exotica, of different sorts
forbidden fruits
you look so cute
heart on fire
skin perspire
time to take it
higher
so this is burning desire...
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-05-04 11:09:13]
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Re: desire
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:36:30 PM AEST
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| this is really deep and creepy |
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Re: desire
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:47:48 PM AEST
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oh my, i wonder what it would be like to swap stories with you! good writing, i like it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: desire
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:47:20 PM AEST
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| we can enjoy ourselves behind closed doors...a fantastic poem, left me thinking...x |
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Re: desire
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by dolly_dagger on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:54:57 PM AEST
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i can't decide if i wanna be there or not...
good atmospheric writing |
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