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The last goodbye
Contributed by
loopylou
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:55:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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we stand under the candlelit street
just you and me
and the lamp posts rays
I wish I could make you listen
but you don’t believe these words
your not surprised by these tears
they've been said and done before
now you've lost hope
I haven’t that’s what hurts the most
I’m left here waiting
whilst your thoughts have been and gone
they leave me standing here
watching your cold eyes
trying to disguise my teenage cries
I wish maybe tomorrow
things will be ok
and that should buy us a little more time
I can’t help but dread our last goodbye
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loopylou
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2004-05-04 08:55:40]
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Re: The last goodbye
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by princess8383 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:21:37 AM AEST
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| I know exactly what you mean.....good job. |
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Re: The last goodbye
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:46:06 PM AEST
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dreading goodbyes? look forward to the hellos... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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