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Revenge of the Undead
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:36:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fire flew from his finger tips
and encircled emerald eyes
Peering over dancing flames of hell
that filled the room with lies
The flames kept getting closer
He could smell the cinging skin
He watch her soul dance around the room and then go after him
Revenge is such a sweet thing
especially cause what he's done
He brought her to the depths of Hell
and made her think she was the one
She believed all of his lullabyes
and thought that it was true
until this fateful day came
that he cooked her body for his own stew
The flames they started dancing
He no longer had control
His fate was coming closer when the flames began to crawl
He paniced and moved quickly but he could not outrun this mess
Cause revenge is such a sweet thing
And this girl was not at rest
Her spirit held him down ...against the cold dark floor
The flames quickly engulfed his body and then began pleading for some more
The room was filled was fire
and smelled of rotting souls
as the spirits did not linger but instead began their journey down below....
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JennyFruFru
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:45:45 AM AEST
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I liked this.
Nice and dark.
I like how vivid it was.
Nice job. |
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:45:59 AM AEST
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| O.k. that was interesting |
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:00:10 AM AEST
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| Hey this uses great discriptive langauge...i got some really scarry images then lol |
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:18:39 PM AEST
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Good work, Jenny, but I am still waiting on the pretty poems again. LOLOLOL
Rita |
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:52:46 PM AEST
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*gasps* oh my... how, how putrid and disgusting and yum!! lol, i'm a fan sometimes of darker things - i like this! ;0)
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Re: Revenge of the Undead
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:53:39 PM AEST
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we are in a dark mood arn't we? another excellent read though.
wildejohnny. |
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