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Hello Heartache
Contributed by
Archie
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:27:45 AM in AEST
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Hello Heartache
I hear your knocking
Please don't enter
inside my door
A love has left
My heart is hurting
you're not my friend
you I abhor.
She left me sad in the cold of spring
while the snow was still on the ground.
I do not think that I will be the same
for her love is not around.
Hello heartache
I'm home from working
you would not leave
my heart is sore
How was your day
Can't help but thinking
that since she's gone
you're my courtier.
My journal explains my relationship with my mom. Toward the end of her life we really did
become great friends.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-05-04 05:27:45]
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:32:13 AM AEST
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my mother died last July i share your pain, just remember where ever she is, she will be proud of you.
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by Loyalist on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:18:25 AM AEST
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My wife's father passed away two years ago and she still has not got over it.
She says she recieves signs and contacts from him.
If you believe, you can still contact those who have passed.
It may not be a tangible kind of contact, but you will communicate in ways that only you and your loved one can understand.
Maybe you already do.
If not open your soul up and let it happen.
If you are true and open to such a pure experience, you will get what you are looking for.
Great peom/song! |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:33:22 AM AEST
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| we share your feelings..sorry for the loss..your lyric is captivating. venkat |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:58:04 AM AEST
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Archie:
Wonderful write, I can relate to your feelings, my mom passed on in Feb. 1986, a strong women of God indeed. It's what she left that keeps me going. Your writing is a wonderful expression of your love for your mom.
BLessings
HOPE4ME2 |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:28:26 PM AEST
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| i sympathise with your loss...i cannot even begin to imagine how you feel...i think this is a beautiful poem and honours your mother's memory beautifully. you should be proud of such a wonderful poem. take care |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:23:32 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your losse.
Both my parents are deceased and I know how u feel.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:54:49 PM AEST
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oh archie, this is so beautiful and heartfelt, it really got right to me because my hubby died in a spring and your poem, so very touching, im sorry for your loss... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:47:02 PM AEST
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I pray that your heart heals. The pain of the heart is the worst kind of pain.
God knows your pain, he cares.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by apollo on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:12:41 AM AEST
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this is extremely emotional yet beautiful. i know that your mother is reading this and singing this very song in a better place now. hang in there, we're all here if you need us. take care.
brandon |
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Re: Hello Heartache
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by inoc on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:44:15 AM AEST
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sorry about your loss of your dear mom
sorry it is late but am only reading this now in Oct 04!
I think your poem is 5 stars
cheers!~ |
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