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MOUNTAIN'S SONG
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:33:11 PM in AEST
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MOUNTAIN'S SONG
Above timberline, melodious echoes of streams.
Rushing over knolls like my dreams.
Stoic Granite Rocks watch and listen.
Mountain dwellers red paint brush glisten.
Scattered over lush mountain side.
Bluebells, like children, atop snow slide.
Fields of daffodils sway with yearning.
Perfect rhythm. heads n'er turning.
Symphonic smells of trees are brimming.
Pines alert the coming new earthlings.
Wee fawn deer nestled among new grass.
Scampering squirrels guard -no trespass.
Paths of glass, melting snow trickles fast,
Mother bear and cubs stir, 'tis Spring at last!
Melodies of mountains memories........
Gushing waterfalls, recall joyful beauties.
Hummingbirds hover strumming on Jew's Harp.
Bald Eagles soar hunting eyes sharp.
Long-legged Jack Rabbits bound and bounce.
"Catch us if you can!" they stay still to announce.
Earth's slow warming for those beneath.....
Long winter's nap, appetites wishes bequeath.
Cold blooded snakes, partners of earth worms.
Prairies dogs, tiny mice, begin their squirms
Snare drums of newly formed leaves......
Can you hear their rustling encouraging breeze?
Colorful birds do their part, singing from their heart.
Splendid mountain, majestic, and wise,
Witness, overcome with it's beauty, cries.........
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
April 27, 2004
"Going back to the mountains
for me, is like going back home!"
"Mountain Smiles!"
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:47:44 PM AEST
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wow connie!! this is breathtakingly beautiful!! living in the forest as i do, i truely appreciate this wonderful write, enchantingly brilliant!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:59:45 PM AEST
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Magnificent piece of work. Beautiful scene. Spring is in its glory here too. Color everywhere you look. New life beginning everywhere. The earth is renewed again for another beautiful season. This is such a joy to read. Peace and serenity abound.
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST
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| So beautiful.. so magnificent..as usual you have not forgotten the animal world..that is lovely to read..:-) venkat |
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:23:58 AM AEST
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Bautifull.
luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy |
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:54:48 AM AEST
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this is beautiful COnni and its making me miss the mountains with the beautiful trees flowers and clear running waters the pines ahhhhhhh something nice to take to sleep with me tonight
Michelle |
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:00:54 AM AEST
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first class poetry, a beautiful description.
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:30:08 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem!
Great imagery...
Greetz,
Hur
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:13:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem with a beautiful picture. |
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:49:35 AM AEST
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Well written poem Connie it tells of a perfect spring and that all is well in your part of the world. This is worth more than the five points allowed. I am disapointed not to give you at least one hundred for this superb piece of writing.
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:54:47 PM AEST
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*sigh*
You know in your heart how much I can appreciate this gorgeous piece.
Such a wonderful read..breathtaking and mesmerising
Thank you
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:29:36 PM AEST
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Home.
Very beautiful poem, thank you so very much, like a page from Heaven.
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Re: MOUNTAIN'S SONG
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:33:29 PM AEST
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Hey, Connie, since mesmerizing, beautiful, wonderful and breathtaking are all taken.... I'll just say...I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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