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Sometimes
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 10:49:06 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I cry at night, just thinking about you.
Thinking about how much you meant to me, and how much it hurt me when you left.
I try to hold back the tears
But they just keep comming.
There's nothing I can do, you tore my heart apart.
I try to forget about you
But my head just keeps feeling with memories of you and me.
It hurts to breath
It hurts to think
All I can feel is the pain you left behind.
Why did you have to do this to me, now I feel like I'm going to die.
You tore my heart apart
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Re: Sometimes
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:06:40 PM AEST
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It's not that bad... a little rough around the edges... but I get the jest of what u're talking about...
U got potential here... don't be so hard on urself... there is poems that I write and post that I think are just throw aways... but everybody seems to love them...
Keep writing... u can only get better...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Sweetpoptartz07 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:52:31 PM AEST
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| Hey, I really think this is really good Truthfully!!! i have been there n if ths is true then i am so so so sorry!!! it hurts like hell ur not in it alone believe u me me n many other gurls are....:0)okay..Great WRite! |
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