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When I Cry
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:10:52 PM in AEST
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When I cry tears, that should never have been cried
Will you cry with me?
Will you help me through the bad times and stay with me through the good,
for nothing is neither good nor bad forever.
Or will you be the cause of my tears?
Will you be the one responsible for the bad times, and the one who ruins the good?
Why do I have all these questions, even though I love you so much?
Maybe I don't truly believe you love me too.
Maybe you don't love me.
Whatever the reason for my questions, I know they are important and they must be answered.
For only when they have been answered will I be able to move on to new things.
For only when my questions have been answered will I know the truth about how you feel.
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Re: When I Cry
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by Loyalist on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:44:25 PM AEST
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I don't know, but I thought is was very good indeed!
It has a nice flow and very intense feelings.
I think that you can safely say you write poetry, because that's what you did.
Keep it flowing. |
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Re: When I Cry
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 10:17:25 PM AEST
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| a wonderfully written contemplation of life and love, keep 'em coming:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When I Cry
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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| I Could Say You're Good At Doing Poetry. I Don't Care What You Say. I Voted For This Poetry |
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Re: When I Cry
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:08:12 PM AEST
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I am sorry for saying my poem sucked. I don't know why I said that but I will not be putting that as a comment anymore as I said in another comment for a poem I wrote. Thank you for your comments.
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