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Skittles
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:48:45 PM in AEST
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I'm at a war with beetles, beetles, beetles
Who came to eat my skittles, skittles, skittles
Crawling closer and closer
But I will not give up
This army attacking my paid for skittles
I have to stop
Truly rainbow colors
Sweet or sour taste
I cut out the beautiful ads
On the computer I copy and paste
How dull would life be
Without this bite-size candy
When you want something delicious
They come in handy
I'm at a war with beetles, beetles, beetles
Who came to eat my skittles, skittles, skittles
Crawling closer and closer
But I will not give up
This army attacking my paid for skittles
I have to stop
Now what would you do
If someone tried to take away what you like
And if there's more of the little thieves
Would you wait awhile and then strike?
Well that's what I did
And now I deservingly rest
My sleep isn't anymore troubled
I took care of my problems with pest
I'm at a war with beetles, beetles, beetles
Who came to eat my skittles, skittles, skittles
Crawling closer and closer
But I will not give up
This army attacking my paid for skittles
I have to stop
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Re: Skittles
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:53:09 PM AEST
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I LOVE Skittles! They're the perfect fruit flavored treat. Great poem. It brought a smile to my face.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Skittles
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:08:35 PM AEST
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I hate skittles...lol..but I loved this write :o)
Thanks for a good chuckle.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Skittles
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:17:25 PM AEST
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It is a woman's right to protect her self and her candy. Personally, I would have stomped every one of the little pests! Good for you.
Rita |
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Re: Skittles
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:38:45 PM AEST
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| lmao! too cute!! and a wonderful poem as i have come to expect in your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Skittles
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by rhymeandreason on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:42:11 AM AEST
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| I like it! nice imagry of the battle for the skittles. I never knew that the beetles,(cockroaches?) were so enamored of the candy connection. I always enjoy your rhymes as they usually are a fresh descriptive examination of the nuances of daily life and its living. Good stuff! I'll talk to you on the round-a-bout. R&R |
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Re: Skittles
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:51:51 AM AEST
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| man skittles are my best friend next to ice cream of course... and if someone stole my skittles right now... uh oh they'd be a dead person... dont mess with a girl when its that time....... lol :) |
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Re: Skittles
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:00:18 AM AEST
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| cute... i love it. |
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