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The stage of life (part 1)
Contributed by
Archie
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:43:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Center stage
An animal hides in the forest
from the enemy who pursues.
Center stage
Birds fly over the ocean
cattching fish for hungry chicks
in a hidden nest
where an animal hides
from the enemy who pursues it
Another day on center stage
the summit of God's creation.
A glimpse into the loving eyes
of him who takes care of us
A giant camera warms the earth
and allows my dim eyes sight
into my place on center stage,
for now I am stage right.
Center stage
A brother teaches a brother
of truth and dignity
Center stage
A brother forgives another's wrongs
in a world of cruelty.
We all play an enormous part
in the fabric of the world.
We think we are mature adults
and yet we are children.
Written on 1/03/99
(part 2, maybe later)
Copyright ©
Archie
... [
2004-05-03 19:43:51]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: The stage of life (part 1)
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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an excellent commentary through the eyes of the photographer... loved the part..
"An animal hides in the forest
from the enemy who pursues.
Center stage
Birds fly over the ocean
cattching fish for hungry chicks
in a hidden nest
where an animal hides
from the enemy who pursues it"
Such is life! your words are wise, keep writting. |
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Re: The stage of life (part 1)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:40:39 AM AEST
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Highly enjoyable - I am impressed by your cinematic technique, for the visual images you portray are very enticing to the eye.
Well done. |
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Re: The stage of life (part 1)
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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Well written. Another great poem.
Take care.
David |
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