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iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:20:53 PM in AEST
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Insatiable and unreliable, underdeveloped and crude
Silence in the cruel and indifferent mood
Tangiable relinquished common wealth notion
Liason convinced to show no emotion.
Distinct variation living somberly black
Each tiny droplet of life slips from the crack
Offer up a due in exact depressing style
In a positive recreation compression worthwhile.
Tabloid news flash your face on TV
Lost in the darkness plagued by loneliness like a disease
On wrists that house scars negitive impressions
To understand the reasons with an unhealthy obsession.
Happiness is not just a state of mind
Insanity and ovbious lack of devotion is all of the same kind
Scratch the surface to get a reaction
Stubborn awareness in no guarenteed satisfaction.
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strange_lindsey
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2004-05-03 19:20:53]
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:43:19 PM AEST
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| I really like the message of the last two lines...it'a an unusual thought! I really like this poem. :) |
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:47:58 PM AEST
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Wow girl, If you get inspired to write like this on the job...can I work with you?? lol...I loved this.
Well done
Rose
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:22:52 PM AEST
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Dang girl, what could you do if you weren't busy at work. I like the way you look at your emotions. Seems very straighforward and (although cynical) very in tuned. Great work.
Rita |
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:34:56 PM AEST
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lindsey, as always a brilliant write, you have a unique stlye, flow and way about your poetry that i simply love, keep 'em comin, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:05:13 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:40:53 AM AEST
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Damn....you are spewing venom! Your job must be rough if this is what was spawned at work! I can see that you had a lot of things on your mind at the time--you were probably as far away, mentally, from work as possible.
But you did a mighty fine job of weaving those thoughts into a great poem!
Truly,
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:45:13 AM AEST
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and to remain hopeless and lost in the insanity.
I like this. Thank you. |
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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*applause* Well said, well said . . . not that I should be surprised. It was, after all, written by you :D.
Dark and chilling and thoughtful and definitely something I'm gonna be rereading a few times . . .
--Nora |
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Re: iNDiFFeReNT MooD, No SaTiSFaCTioN aND NeGiTiVe iMPReSSioNS
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:59:51 PM AEST
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"stubborn awareness is no guaranteed satisfaction"
I love this line
Another great poem, Lindsey |
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