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The ugly half
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look deep into the corner
surround yourself with gloom
Try to forget the memories of all those empty tombs
The thoughts... they provoke you
They take your mind away
Away to someone else's world
So far away to play
To dance with bloody bodies
To capitivate your soul
To fill your heart with anger
and to kill the ones you love
Your nightmares become realities
you dont know where they've come
You have no idea where you were when you did the deed you done
Tomorrow is another day
You swear there'll be no more
But Tomorrow is another day
and you know inside that trouble is sure to come........
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-05-03 18:21:22]
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Re: The ugly half
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:29:01 PM AEST
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Oh no, the dark ones got to you too??? I felt sure you were my safe haven in the light. You write this well though, g/f. LOL
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Re: The ugly half
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:40:49 PM AEST
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delightfully dark:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The ugly half
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:50:19 PM AEST
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This Is Really Awesome Dark Write !!!!!!
LoL Don't Think I Would Wanna Dance With Bloody Bodies Though !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: The ugly half
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:52:36 PM AEST
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IT'S ALL DARK & DIRTY & YOUR HEART IS HURTING! DON'T GIVE UP W/O A FIGHT OVER HOW SHALL YOU LIVE A LOVE INTO THE NIGHT!! NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY ALL IS NEVER SHATTERED OR JUST A BLINK FROM BETRAY!!! GREAT POEM!!!!
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Re: The ugly half
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:06:01 PM AEST
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ahhh my friend, there is an ugly side to us all. The only difference in us is some admit it and some wont ;o)
I loved this
Very well done
Roses
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Re: The ugly half
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by arden on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:15:29 PM AEST
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wow so dark and just amazing! i loved this.
i hope to see more like this from you.
you do dark wonderfully.
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Re: The ugly half
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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i prefer the nice half!, this is an aspect of human nature that's within us all good write.
wildejohnny.
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Re: The ugly half
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:40:59 AM AEST
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"To dance with bloody bodies..To capitivate your soul..To fill your heart with anger and to kill the ones you love"..Oooh..very dark..my friend..every one has some dark inner corner
..as dawn breaks in the morning..we usually move in light..well this is a good read.venkat
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