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Living half dead
Contributed by
sheri
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:28:43 PM in AEST
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A thousand echoes stir my soul
reaching in to my mind to make me whole
the love that was had has crashed and burned
much like the reputation I drank so hard to earn
long drawn out pauses of chilly silence
are interrupted by world wide broad cast violence
serenity hasn't made it here to this tiny place
where devils play the mandalin with etchy grace
gone are the days when I would have sat to listen
enthralled to the point my azule eyes glisten
fool that I was for living half dead
searching sluggishly for lover's head
never noticing the missing heart
or a mind that had splintered into jagged parts
I tried to love the beast in me
but in the end someone decided it wouldn't be
Jared the incubuc keep me awake
trudging up love's ghost that I couldn't shake
angels reached for my shattered frame
just limp flesh washed up by October rain
a nawed and broken little saint
that was perfect with vile dishonest taint
golden ripples of a setting sun
my life has finally begun.
Copyright ©
sheri
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2004-05-03 17:28:43]
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Re: Living half dead
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:03:35 PM AEST
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Re: Living half dead
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by MysticFireFairy on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:17:06 PM AEST
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| Oh My Lanta I wish I could write like this you can flow with your words and feelings but for me its very hard because most of my feelings i cant get on paper. You have wonderful talent keep up the great work! |
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Re: Living half dead
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:53:34 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write I Liked It !!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
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Re: Living half dead
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by Sweetpoptartz07 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:05:33 PM AEST
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| Wow this is excellent keep up the good work!!! Great Write!:-) |
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