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Gone
Contributed by
carrielynn
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:26:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The space between depressed and insane
When the only thing you feel is numb
Your world is racing around you and yet it doesnt change
Each day you hope another doesnt come
With all the fears and all the tears I shed
My soul is more like a stone with no emotion to come or go
The feet of my faith have lost their tred
And my cold heart has no more love to share or show
I send no hope, for I am too far gone
No more reality or life for me to see
I am dead to the world, I have left and I am done
No longer on earth will I be
Copyright ©
carrielynn
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2004-05-03 17:26:40]
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:37:41 PM AEST
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| I like this alot. Visit my site, join for free, and post some of your dark poetry. |
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Re: Gone
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by Archie on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:38:58 PM AEST
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Great poem
The tears I cry when all alone
will one day rain in blessings
unto the one I help and hold
and share with them my lessons
If but hold on through the dark
the harm that comes upon me
will help me mend the broken heart
of him or her who needs me.
Your friend --Archie |
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Re: Gone
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by williamdye on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:39:51 PM AEST
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| Ooops I posted under anonymously 2 comments earlier! |
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Re: Gone
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by MysticFireFairy on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:22:26 PM AEST
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| That was so beautiful I am totally speechless it was very interesting I wish I could write like that you can flow.... Keep up the great work! |
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Re: Gone
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:16:16 AM AEST
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| I liked it!Very deep... |
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