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Judged
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 04:01:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I sit alone in my corner
no one seems to understand.
When people look at me what do they see?
They don't see the things I do.
They don't see the lonliness upon my face.
They dont see the tears streaming down my cheeks.
I sit alone in my corner
no one seems to understand.
When people talk to me what do they hear?
They don't hear my screams of terror.
They don't hear my screams of sorrow.
They don't hear my cries of pain.
They don't hear or see anything because i'm not even there.
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Re: Judged
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 04:11:56 PM AEST
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| This is great! BUT remember to comment on 3 poems for everyone u submitt! |
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Re: Judged
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by sheri on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 04:51:13 PM AEST
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| Great poem, that makes an excellant point. Good job. |
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Re: Judged
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:05:39 PM AEST
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| This s good, I think there are a lot of us here that can relate to this at some point or another. |
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Re: Judged
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by Lionel on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:23:17 AM AEST
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| It worries me that although your poems are really good, yet, they tend to be so sad. I hope you aren't sad very often. |
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