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Time & Moment
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Struggling, thriving, waiting, whining
what is this, how is this,
where is this, why is this
Feeling, stealing, seing being
Is it all for nothing?
Or are you all scoffing!
Copyright ©
SweetRhythm
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2004-05-03 15:10:01]
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Re: Time & Moment
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:37:24 PM AEST
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| This is really good! Remember to comment on other peoples poetry to get more comments on yours! You have a great talent though! |
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Re: Time & Moment
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by arden on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:26:16 AM AEST
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i really really like this. short though but i think it adds to the poem. i loved how this was written. wonderfully done. i look forward to more.
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