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Daddy, Don't You Care?
Contributed by
ml02
on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicide
Daddy
Don't cry
You don't really care
If I die
Or
If I live
I've always just been
Your punching bag
And so on.
Black eyes
At the age of three
Brocken bones
At four
You hurt me
Daddy
The abuse
I had to take
I didn't deserve it.
So
Drink another beer
By the end
I'll be dead
Don't mind the silence
Or the screams
Just keep on
Go on smoking
That cigarette
It's just
Your little boy
Is dead
Daddy
Don't you care?
Don't you feel
A thing
Remorse
For the bleeding
Nights of pain
And tears
You caused.
Aren't you sad
I'm gone
Like forever
Not just
Until tomorrow
Don't you see
You're punching bag
Is gone
Never to return
I took my life
Wouldn't give you
The pleasure
Of killing me.
Copyright ©
ml02
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2002-10-04 14:45:00]
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by LJ on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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| Wow! I don't know what to say. I'm sorry isn't enough. |
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 06:21:39 AM AEST
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Hi, MI02, this was written with so much emotion. I can feel the pain and torture endured by the child. Great write. Such a sad situation..
Jenni |
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by aubz_09 on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 08:26:31 AM AEST
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| You write so well. This poem almost made me cry, :(. I'm sorry |
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by Twinky on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:02:32 AM AEST
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| ohh my god this poem hit me hard.... i was never physically abused but i have been mentally and emotionally abused by my parents... this poem is really good and it has a lot of emotion in it..... it made me cry, but thats ok |
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by TiNyOnE on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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wow, this was really deep
i was never hit to the point of bruises and such.
but this was a good poem. it really made a good strong point.
keep up the good writing. |
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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:21:28 PM AEST
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Great poem. I can feel the pain and emotions there. It made me cry.
ShadowsCloud |
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