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Words i didnt speak with my actions
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Finally reached the age of a young woman.
Responsibility laden.
Became drunk stupid.
Completely over loaded.
Making out with my best mate.
Not remembering the next day, just lucky it was not delicate.
Telling the one I love I no longer want him round.
Almost found myself at the bottom of a bottle, drowned.
To my rescue my soul mate and friend.
That I dearly needed their support to depend,
Emotional tears flowed,
All I could do was off load.
My friend, he did turn just I fell.
He there to catch me, just as I was to say farewell.
Talk we did much.
We barely close enough to touch.
A kiss on his cheek.
Me saying thank you whilst feeling weak.
Words I did speak with my actions.
As he just walks and listens.......
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2004-05-03 12:14:04]
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Re: Words i didnt speak with my actions
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:22:29 PM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Words i didnt speak with my actions
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by Black13 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:15:00 PM AEST
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I agree, this is good.
Very nice word use.
I like the flow of it. |
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Re: Words i didnt speak with my actions
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:48:10 AM AEST
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| the title is wrong it should be 'words i did speak with my actions.' |
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Re: Words i didnt speak with my actions
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by Lost_Shadow on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:18:54 AM AEST
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| If this is how I understand it, ouch. But either way excellent poem |
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