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Excruciation
Contributed by
Bloodyrose
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:47:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Somewhere deep inside the lament echoes,
Chambers of my heart tear wide
And I drown in my own blood
Coughing tears of epiphany,
Weeping eulogy for scandal torn,
Hopeless eyes water,
Frosty days of dawn.
Crosses sit on winding hell
Swaying in the nothingness
Of breezes in song and fortitude.
I wait and whisper,
Communicating through the lack
Of words, of love, of scorn.
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Bloodyrose
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2004-05-03 11:47:22]
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Re: Excruciation
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:51:36 AM AEST
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A powerful write from a hard hitting film, well done.
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Re: Excruciation
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Re: Excruciation
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by NightOwl on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:49:02 PM AEST
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Awesome, powerful poem that portrays so much emotion! Well done!
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