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The Words are Lost on me
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:01:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Enclosed in your hand,
A place I dont understand,
So dark/So surreal,
It surrounds me,
As my skin begins to peel
Always rejection, subjection, infection
Words are lost on me
Always bleeding, needing, grieving,
And the words are lost on me
As I stare at your face,
I become aware of this place,
Words begin to flow through my mind,
And it completes me,
And its a place where I can find
Always rejection, subjection, infection
Words are lost on me,
Always bleeding, needing, grieving
And the words are lost on me
Bound by blood-red leather,
Already starting to weather,
Great giant gold letters,
And its inside of me,
A world of mad hatters
Always rejection, subjection, infection
Words are lost on me,
Its complementary, Its elementary
This worlds just a dictionary
And the words are lost on me
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Re: The Words are Lost on me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:23:15 PM AEST
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I found myself intrigued by this one. You now have me intrigued often, with your off-the-cuff visions . . . I like the repetition in this. Its what this poem needs, and you distributed them effectively throughout.
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Re: The Words are Lost on me
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:26:53 PM AEST
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| very interesting, wonderfully written, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Words are Lost on me
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by Drive_By on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:58:00 PM AEST
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| Hehehe......all about the idiosyncracies and ideology of language-there's virtually no way to express certain feelings in some languages! ever heard of Michel Foucault before? |
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