|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
don't blow your cover
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:25:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Hold it in
don't show
your true
feelings for
you will
blow your cover
and become
as weak as me
tho you seem
strong and over comeing of all your problems
it's just a cover
a fake smile
a paper heart
that hides away the weakend soul
like a wave over sand
slashing your heart
and makeing pain
don't show the pain
i've caused you
for you will blow your cover
Copyright ©
lexxie
... [
2004-05-03 09:25:24]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: don't blow your cover
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 10:28:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Acting one way when you feel another way is always hard. I did it for a long time, and I did break..finally. Your write really hit home in that regard, and I thank you for that. |
|
|
Re: don't blow your cover
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:48:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's been said before, and I say it again. Be yourself. Personally, I don't really care what people think about me. I really, really like to be the center of attention, though. Anyway, be yourself. You have the ability to be someone no one else can ever be. Weak? All I can say is that you have a powerfull way with words. Your true self shines through those letters. Don't let that fire be put out.
Take care.
David |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
