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The Dark Dynasty
Contributed by
blueheart
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:21:51 AM in AEST
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As night spreads forth over the land,
Emerges a force to entwine pure hands,
A dynasty that ignites the realms beneath,
And corrupts white minds while they're asleep.
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Strands of hair are snipped as eyes begin to bleed,
On decayed hearts, these deranged dwellers feed,
Pleading shrieks of terror are voiceless to their ears,
The demons from the dark have built their kingdom here.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-05-03 06:21:51]
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Loyalist on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:27:08 AM AEST
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Wow!
Deep and dark!
Right up my alley!
Brilliant pen!
I must check out your other entries. |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:52:58 AM AEST
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Very creepy and morbid and done so well in so few lines. Impressive write.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:32:37 PM AEST
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oooo dark one hanna lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:35:37 PM AEST
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| little graphic... infact so graphic it gives me chills....... Strands of hair are snipped as eyes begin to bleed... that just reminds me of my fear the when i ever pick up a razor like to shave my legs i always feel like im gonna accidently slice my eyeball....... ewwwwwwww............. :) :) :) |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:33:01 PM AEST
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Perhaps you should change your name to DarkHeart or BlackHeart..LOL ha ha ha a very very dark timbre herein this write my friend... but an enjoyable journey into the abyss of dark hued dreams... I too have ventured there and I must say what a nice write this is..albeit a dark one... Bon Chance!
P.S. I hope the Dark Dynasty will not cast its shadow to YPDC..perhaps and maybe this place will be the fortress of light where poet-warriors and lady merceneries set out to fight this dark dynasty... ha ha ha ha LOL |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:40:48 PM AEST
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this was freakin sweet!!
wow so dark and creepy.
this was beyond amazing.
words simply cannot do this write justice.
i loved this.
bloody awesome!
Arden |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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Wow. The emotions really reflect off the your words onto the reader. Its so dark yet beautiful. I love the creepy feelings I get as I read the poem.
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:51:06 PM AEST
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Wow, this is cool! Glad the thought helped. You worked miracles with it. I am very impressed.
Rita |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:58:15 PM AEST
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Wow, this is cool! Glad the thought helped. You worked miracles with it. I am very impressed.
Rita |
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Re: The Dark Dynasty
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:58:26 AM AEST
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| Oh wow!!!!! I loved this. I have goosbumps running up and down my spine. *S* Cynthia |
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