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Tranquility
Contributed by
shanarah
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Tranquility
My eyes are lifted by squealing echoes,
whirlwinds bring stagnant air
Bruised destiny consumed upon me,
craving greatly for tranquility
Camoflage these distorted screams,
immeasurable secret pains
Chanting inward of this existing state,
pleading for a serene mind
Impulsive actions become explicate,
thickening this rage with hate
Invading the freedom that was taken,
brilliance of escape is the way
Impurities and obstructions are lowered,
a triumph is forthcoming
my eyes rest from the harmonizing echoes,
motionless air brings tranquility
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shanarah
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2004-05-02 22:57:22]
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Re: Tranquility
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:06:04 PM AEST
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I loved your style in writing this poem, a wonderful read.
Blessings
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Re: Tranquility
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:11:58 PM AEST
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Entrancing. I aboslutely love the way you phrase things--it always leaves a sharp, brilliant vision in the imagination. The more I read, the more impressed I become.
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