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lost in your eyes i stay
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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im falling
falling in to what will last forever
falling into your love
and knwoing it will never change
the scares inside are now gone
and the ones on my arms are fadeing
for with your touch and the vibe of your voice
makes everything okay
i have no more worries
for i forget all of them when around you
when im around you beauiful
i forget im ailve
for it feels as if iv gone to heaven
and will never return
im lost in your eyes
and wont ever look away
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lexxie
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2004-05-02 21:46:59]
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Re: lost in your eyes i stay
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:03:19 PM AEST
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| Really good write! |
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Re: lost in your eyes i stay
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:51:26 PM AEST
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I agree with lil ange... this is a very good write... well expressed.... keep writing....
~Donna~ |
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Re: lost in your eyes i stay
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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Beautifully expressed. One of your best, so far, I dare say.
Take care.
David |
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