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The Crimson Rain
Contributed by
Rylo
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:39:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A soul cries out into the night,
As it is pulled further away from the heavenly light
The crimson rain will fall
When you hear the angel of darkness call
You will no longer fear, any whispers in your ear
For death is now hear
Rise up, rise up to the blackened sky,
And listen to the souls as they cry
Judgment day has come, as mortals scatter and run
Now round up your army, the army of darkness,
For they will lead the way,
To where darkness likes to play
March through the towns, without leaving a sound
Claim all the souls that are weak,
For you’ll grow stronger, as darkness continues to creep
Leave the souls of the light tortured, and slained
As you sink your teeth into their juggler veins
Tear their flesh, and leave a bloody mess
Stake their hearts, and set them on fire,
Then listen to the music, as it grows higher
Dance around in the crimson rain
As their blood spills from their pain
Paint your corpse in crimson red, then invite them to dance with the dead
Bring no mercy, bring no shame
Just bring upon the crimson pain
2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-05-02 21:39:22]
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by JadedExistence on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST
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This is amazing, very creepy. Great visuals.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:19:39 PM AEST
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Rylo, you know I think you are extremely talented and definitely versatile, but please come back to the light where humans live. The dark is pulling you further in. LOL
Rita |
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by Dragontear27 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:56:29 PM AEST
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| Whoa there way to many resident evil and dawn of the dead movies lol, but very very nice write, and you seem to capture the torture and other......um evil things very well. Good Job |
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:54:56 AM AEST
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this is great Ronald enjpyable read......
Love ya
Michelle |
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:37:41 AM AEST
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| Hauntingly beautiful. This is truly a masterpice. |
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Re: The Crimson Rain
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:24:37 PM AEST
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Very Creepy But Very Enjoyable Read Hun !! Loved It Keep Em Coming :-)
Love,Hugs & God Bless
Your AnGeL Always & Forever |
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