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Keeping the Moment
Contributed by
2ndChance
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:26:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The serene cherry sky,
so many clouds,
pink and orange,
no darkness,
only light.
The idle sea,
softened waves,
breathing,
in tides,
every so often.
The dim sun,
slightly asleep,
questionably listening,
beaming down,
ever so lightly.
Breath-taking scene,
only move once,
as I capture your escence,
keeping the moment.
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2ndChance
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2004-05-02 21:26:25]
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Re: Keeping the Moment
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:00:22 PM AEST
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| Very good! You have a great talent! |
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Re: Keeping the Moment
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:00:48 PM AEST
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I loved this one... reminds of a sunrise on the water... extremely moving ...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Keeping the Moment
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:39:07 AM AEST
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| *claps claps* more great poetry by Thee. |
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