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Frozen Eyelids
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:02:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Frozen eyelids picture the things I did to you,
The things I said to you that came unglued
As your eardrums pounded your thought...
It all came to me in liquid form
And certain courage was born,
Enabling me to say anything,
Words I never had the strength to say
Did I shed a little extra light on your day
Did it hurt your eyes, or was it only surprise
And I felt the salty sting as it fell from your face,
Lifting me to embrace…
Warmth only your eyes could provide.
For the first time I cried.
Yet denied your sympathy,
For it felt like nothing… to me.
And I formed this bitter sweet
One that you could always count on
Lost in your oblivion
Copyright ©
Diatribe
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2004-05-02 21:02:13]
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Re: Frozen Eyelids
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:56:55 PM AEST
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| Wow this is extremly powerful! You have a great talent! Share it with the world |
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Re: Frozen Eyelids
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:39:20 AM AEST
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This is an exceptional poem. I hope to read more of your work sometime. Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Frozen Eyelids
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by Juliet on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:37:09 PM AEST
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Great job
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