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Finding a Forever Friend
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I never had a friend forever
For the times are always severed
Changing schools a couple times
Being short on clothes and dimes
Simple things shove friends away
And I just long to say one day
That I’ve known so-and-so so long
And our friendship is so strong
I have tried with many a peer
To have a friend that is so near
Near enough to share my thoughts
In whom comfort could be sought
Someone I can always call
To catch me, should I ever fall
I had Cassie for a year
She was one of joyful cheer
Kindergarten came and went
And to a new school I was sent
I had Amy, I had Danielle
Both of whom were really swell
Then came Ava, best of all
She’s the one that I recall
But then I moved and so ‘twas gone
I came to a new friendship dawn
I found Christen, she’s okay
But she’s not one that’s meant to stay
Emily is the greatest yet
But I am just a silhouette
She’s got Katie, I do too,
But we don’t do things like they do
Paige started out as something fun
It was short-lived and now we’re done
The rest are paired and I’m alone
In some abandoned twilight zone
Forever searching for a friend
Someone to cherish in the end
Tanya holds a candle high
So far we have seen eye to eye
I hope that we can stick it through
And keep our friendship tried and true
But in the end if we should fail
I’ll never tell a lonely tale
For friends are friends no matter what
And I’m just stuck in a small rut
I just want a forever friend
To bring this loneliness to end
Forever friends are rare and few
If you’ll be mine, I’ll be yours too
Copyright ©
liquidsunshine
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2004-05-02 20:58:28]
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:54:54 PM AEST
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| This is really good! I hope you find your true friend! |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:31:52 PM AEST
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| sad and lovely. |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:30:16 AM AEST
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made me think deeply about myself this did. allthough i have lots of aquantances my true friends i havn't seen for years, i've got so engrossed in raising a family and trling to have a career that they've fallen by the way side. Must get that telephone book out! thanks for that.
Your friend in poetry.
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by lifefliesby on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:25:25 AM AEST
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friend forever
it's great write but I'm sorry you can't consider anyone a true friend forever...
they will come
love as a friend,
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by blueheart on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:50:57 AM AEST
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| To a certain extent everyone longs for a forever friend although only a handful have found their eternal friend. I myself want to find a forever friend, but it seems a little risky after the many bad friendships I've been through. Great poem, one I could truly relate to. |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
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Awwwww, I know that feeling Liquid. We poets kinda burn real bright and not everyone can handle it, but you'll find that friend some day. This was a cool read.
Stitch |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:36:00 AM AEST
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| That is cool! And I know how you feel. I hope you find that person who is a true and gracious friend. Your poem is very positive. |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by bernard on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:49:37 PM AEST
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I too know the feeling a forever friend is a phantom for most of us, I trust and hope that you will come across such a friend keep smiling
bernard |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:41:20 PM AEST
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Sad poem. Everyone truly needs a "kindred spirit." Someone who will ALWAYS be there for you, through thick and thin. I think that everybody shares that same desire as you. I love the way you poured your feelings into this poem. Beautiful.
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:41:29 PM AEST
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Sad poem. Everyone truly needs a "kindred spirit." Someone who will ALWAYS be there for you, through thick and thin. I think that everybody shares that same desire as you. I love the way you poured your feelings into this poem. Beautiful.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Finding a Forever Friend
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:19:36 PM AEST
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How hard it is to find someone true! I'm glad to have one chap o' this sort. But it seems you only find one when you're not looking. At least I suspect that.
Often the things we yearn for only come after we've learned to deal without them. God's way of making us stronger, I suppose. We cannot lean upon things of this world.
Hope someone shows up soon, Chels!
Andrew |
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