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You and Me
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:44:18 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes and hear the waves,
I see the rocks, along the shore the caves.
I hear us splashing out at sea,
And I wonder what happened to you and me.
The scene shifts and we're in the backyard,
We're sword-fighting with poles, our faces marred,
Running around shouting war cries with our friends,
We all swore then that it'd never end.
Time flies past and we all went separate ways,
You and I stood together to face the new days.
We grew up, and the tide just swept us along,
Moved in with our father, just trying to belong.
Then it seems we both changed overnight,
All we could do was quarrel and fight.
Knowing we couldn't go back, I left home,
Saying I just needed to be left alone.
When I come to visit, I never stay long,
I don't say it, but everything's wrong.
Between you and I, it will never be the same,
I don't know, sister; but that's a crying shame.
~*~Jaime Moran~*~
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Re: You and Me
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:53:17 PM AEST
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Love it. :D:D
(Sorry, head not working right now because of a cold...)
Your sis,
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Re: You and Me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:54:42 PM AEST
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awwww so sad jaime, so beautifully written, i hope you can work things out with her:) huggles n' love, nessa xxx...
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Re: You and Me
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:10:26 AM AEST
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auh such a beautiful poem, very sad story carried throughout but very well writen & makes for a great read. 5/5
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Re: You and Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:15:10 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Reminds me of me and my sisters, though Vicci and Sarah were usually trying to knock me out with the pole, not playing with me lmao.
Your sis
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